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Sometimes it seems

Sometimes it seems that life’s unfair
It makes you fall and crawl to stay alive
It breaks your heart and your empire
That you build your entire life

Does this living worth your pain?
Does it deserve your tears becoming rain?
Where is the shelter from regret’s flame?
There is no cure for the feeling of blame

Sometimes it seems that life’s unfair
It rips your heart in pieces and sets the fire
Now and then again and again it makes you cry
The pain flows in your veins making you want to die

Does this living worth your pain?
Does it deserve your tears becoming rain?
Where is the shelter from regret’s flame?
There is no cure for the feeling of blame

It always seems that other people have it easy
And hate, pain, envy are freezing
Deep inside your broken soul
And you always look for who has the fault

Does this living worth your pain?
Does it deserve your tears becoming rain?
Where is the shelter from regret’s flame?
There is no cure for the feeling of blame

Same situations
How to break wicked circle of same situations
That are so painful and left you behind
Feeling so empty and without sane mind
When your lost pieces cannot be found

Those situations are always the same
They repeat and appear to be worse than it used to be
They make you run same circle of path again
Blinded by pain and regrets you are not able to see

It just happens and leaves you with feelings so hollow
As you know they will always follow
And that knowledge sets inside the horror’s fire
To find new way is that what you really desire

As time goes by you feel that there is nothing you can do
You fight, you cry, you are silen, but that doesn’t help, too
It seems that others cannot see that you are slowly dying
As they continue screaming, hurting, fighting

Alone
Lost inside my little broken world
Your one sentence was like sharpest sword
That went straight into my deepest core
You were the one I was living for

You went away without even looking back
You left me bleeding, crying for you
I fell on my knees and everything went black
I didnt know anymore what should I do

I'm lost without you
I cannot breathe, I stumble
At the moment I lost you
My heart became numb

Time passes by so slowly
Healing my wounds step by step
I just think about you mostly
Remembering the time we met

I count our days and weeks
Remembering all that we did together
And now I count days and weeks
That I have spent alone

Every minute feels like an hour
Every hour feels like a day
My love bloomed into a death's flower
But I must go through my way

ALONE